you’ll discover the world
is littered with moons. Try
not to step on
all the broken
glass.
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Seen quite a few of these floating round dA - there's a competition based around the concept. This isn't an entry for that, just a short sketch inspired by the idea.
It's interesting to think about: what you would say to your past selves if you had the chance...
Ooh, mini-poem :D I like it! I feel I ought to say why but I don't know why...
ReplyDeleteIt's a really interesting idea - communicating with your past self. I'm wondering what I'd say to myself now. Might have to do a post on the same theme if you don't mind me stealing the concept :)
Yay, thank you! It is very mini... :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, of course I don't mind - I stole it myself! I guess if I did actually go back, I would have a LOT to say to myself, but the poem gives the jist of it all.
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Good things come in mini packages :P
ReplyDeleteYay, cheers. Although when I started to try and write something, I realised I had so much to say that it could end up a novel knowing me :/ And which younger self? There are so many!
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I know! There are so many different things you could say, and so many different directions you could take to actually saying it. I'm sure you could write several novels on it! haha
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Sorry I didn't comment, Jen-frendy!
ReplyDeleteThis is trés wunderbar, it's so lovely! I just love your poetry. When you're famous I'm going to be your keenest fan! You'll have to send me signed copies of all your poetry collections... <3
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Yay, epicus win!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, J-frendy. Omg, the idea of me having a poetry collection out is so awesome, it makes my brain implode with joy! haha <3
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